Hey @Dk360 sounds bluesy for sure! Cool riffs.
@toogdog’s advice here is spot on. You’re not keeping a steady pulse.
The secret for you to get to the next level is to strive for 80% of your practice time to be with one of the forms of rhythmic accountability I mentioned here:
It seems like you’re also asking if you’re playing is following the 12-bar blues form. From the riffs you’re playing, I can’t tell specifically what underlying harmony you’re hearing under each riff, and with the breaks in pulse it’s tough to know where in the form you are. The solution for all this is simple: JAM TRACKS.
Just search for “12-bar blues backing track in G” on YouTube and find one you like and play the riffs over that, and then you’ll know if you’re following the form or not.
Again, your riffs sound really cool. I hope these suggestions are helpful for you to take it to the next level. 